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mountain

#294478 Fri, 17 Nov 06 07:54 PM

Hello Young Lady,

I just wanted you to know that I loved what you'd taught us on Thursday night. Frankly, I'd rather learn English (in terms of gramars and writing styles) than Lit. because I only been in U.S for four years and I find it's difficult to understand Lit. But I was just wondering if you could provide me a link to "Power writing"(?).

Thanks,

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nona the brit

#294492 Fri, 17 Nov 06 08:38 PM

Hello Young Lady - this is a very strange way to start a note to someone - especially your teacher! It sounds like a creeeeepy pick-up line.

Dear 'her name'

I just wanted you to know that I loved what you taught us on Thursday night. Frankly, I'd rather learn English in terms of grammar and writing styles than Literature because I've only been in the U.S for four years and I find it difficult to understand Lit. But I was just wondering if you could please provide me a link to "Power writing"?