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Anonymous  #273308  Thu, 28 Sep 06 01:29 AM
However, from around May 15th until September, there are many days of extreme heat, which just like for humans can cause deaths, can cause losses of plants and animals as well.       


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Clive  #273335  Thu, 28 Sep 06 03:05 AM

Hi,

However, from around May 15th until September, there are many days of extreme heat, which just like for humans can cause deaths, can cause losses of plants and animals as well.       

However, from around May 15th until September, there are many days of extreme heat, which can cause deaths for humans just as they can cause losses and deaths for plants and animals.    

Best wishes, Clive    



  
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