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Anonymous  #469150  Sat, 26 Jan 08 08:22 PM

Dear Mr. <name>,

 

I understand that you have an opening in your department, which I found out about through <name>. If you are searching for an energetic highly motivated individual to join your team, I would like to encourage you to consider my application. I wish to find a position where I can build upon my current skills base. I am currently in the process of completing my CCNA Certification and expect to have this within the next few weeks.

 

The qualifications and professional knowledge I can bring to your organization include:

- installation of hardware and software

- operating systems

- system administration

-  network engineering

 

I look forward to speaking to you soon.

  
Mister Micawber  #469277  Sun, 27 Jan 08 05:45 AM

I presume that you are attaching your resume; you should make reference to it in the cover letter:


Dear Mr. <name>,

I understand that you have an opening in your department, which I found out about through <name>.  If you are searching for an energetic, highly motivated individual to join your team, please consider my application. I am looking for a position where I can build upon my current skills base. I am currently in the process of completing my CCNA Certification and expect to have this within the next few weeks.

The knowledge and professional experience I can bring to your organization include:

- installation of hardware and software

- operating systems

- system(s) administration

-  network engineering

I have enclosed/attached my resume / curriculum vitae for your consideration.  Please contact me if I cananswer any further questions.  I look forward to the possibility of speaking with you soon.


Sincerely yours,

[Signature]
[Name]
[Contact information]

  
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