Check my grammer and also suggest what should I do to imorove my written En

Yesterday , I was really *** off and cranky. I also posted some wired , retarded questions comments ETC … but who cares ….
Any way after gettin off from my work I hit gym and work out for 3 hours .. I was so *** off but I thought to be +ve and spend my madness in +ve way …. So after work-out when I head back home , I took shower and hit one of the clubs in downtown ….

I started dancing on the floor , while dancing I saw 3 gals oh my ..real hot chicks … I jus went up to `em and made some moves and they start laughing … I said to one of ‘em "you are really cute" … she said “thank you “ and after a minute she took off my specs “ and she asked me can you see me now .. I siad with sly smile .."you’re looking more cute now" … she laughed a lot on this comment after few secs .. I just lean to her and said this in her ear “ I wish I was crossed eye so I can see you twice” .. she was all over me …

so I thought , now its time to close the deal … I don’t want any ONS cus she was really GF material … I asked her
"are you single , she said “NO” … and I thought not again …. You know what I was thinking at that time “
Some body here post an article that 10 out of 7 woman doesn’t want to date with foreigners’”

Any way ,so I asked her twice like a gentleman .. I`m neither can be a bad boy nor punk … so finally I left the club ….

So do you also think that being a foreigner and live at wilderness place kills your dating scene too ….
And lots of hot and beautiful chicks don’t wna date with me cus I’m foreigner? OR what’s wrong with me…


Notepending time with `em 20 minutes LOL

Thanks .. but Im on one of the dating forums  and whenever I wrote there ..  I always found somebody bitching about my grammer .. So I want to improve it and want to use my anger in +ve way ..  -

Thanks

Hi Khan,

I have to tell you that I had NO idea what +ive meant until about my fourth reading of it. I would suggest that you do NOT use those types of abbreviations unless you are really sure your audience uses them too.

I personally have no patience for... writing that just... goes on and on... without period...just one thought connected to the next... etc so my suggestion (if you DO want to improve) is to start using period and full sentences more often. You don't have to elminate this style all together when you want to add an aside or a miscellaneous comment, but don't  make it your only method of punctuation.

On the other hand, if you are just writing for you, then follow Clive's advice and don't worry about it too much.