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Check_grammer  #514766  Sat, 17 May 08 10:50 AM
 

Sir,

In reference to the post of [xyz] advertised in "xyz", Dated 11-May-2008 I would like to apply for this position.  I am well-suited for this job because I have 18 years of experience with billing systems from the beginning to the ending process in utility company, from last four years i am working on application built by Oracle Corporation named 'Oracle CC&B' , "Customer Care and Billing" operated in worldwide utilities companies.

I have attached my resume, which details my background in information technology. What my resume does not describe is my character. I am a conceptual thinker, a generator of creative ideas, and a self-starter.
My peers recognize me as a hard-working, creative and proactive with the ability to develop new expertise in a short time.

I hope that you will consider my application.  If you have further questions, please contact me at



Sincerely yours,

xyz 

  
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Feebs11  #515363  Sun, 18 May 08 11:54 PM

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Dear Sir,

With  reference to the post of [xyz] advertised in "xyz",dated 11 May 2008 I would like to apply for this position.  I am well-suited for this job because I have 18 years of experience in a utility company with billing systems from the beginning to the ending process . For the last four years I have used an application built by Oracle Corporation named 'Oracle CC&B' , "Customer Care and Billing", operated in worldwide utilities companies.

I have attached my resume, which details my background in information technology. What my resume does not describe is my character. I am a conceptual thinker, a generator of creative ideas, and a self-starter.
My peers recognize me as hard-working, creative and proactive with the ability to develop new expertise in a short time.

I hope that you will consider my application.  If you have further questions, please contact me at



Yours faithfully,

xyz 

 
  
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