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Latest post Sun, Oct 5 2008 7:12 PM by Je_nie_dieu. 0 replies.
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Je_nie_dieu  +  573530 Sun, 05 Oct 08 07:12 PM
Hello,

I know how the very beginning is important and feel that I don't have the right mastery for being concise and sounding natural. Please help me out!

We should love the world we live in, its constant flux and infinite variety.  It serves as an inexhaustible source of strength in overcoming any obstacle. In retrospect, no one ever answered my questions. Filled with curiosity I became a precocious reader able to concentrate and deliberate upon  a matter. Finally, the mysteries were being unraveled. This instilled in me self-reliance as well as the character of a winner. Taking such attitude as a twelfth-grader I have achieved desired academic results in Lithuania. Therefore I am applying to best European universities.

What do you think in general, what impression it gives? I hope not negative.

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Over the line?! You-you’re-you’re so far past the line, that you-you can’t even see the line! The line is a dot to you!
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