Please check my letter for any kinda error(logical, technical or gramatical etc..)..Thanks

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mzca  #496865  Sat, 05 Apr 08 04:54 PM
Dear Sirs,

 Subject: Visa Validity Issue  

I intended to stay 4 weeks in Canada got visa for 4 weeks as well. I face dates mix-up and ignoring of my intended date of travel. Dates detail is: 

Valid from 22/03/08 until 21/04/08
Issued on 29/03/08
And I’m informed to collect passport on 03/04/08. 

The issue is

 -         visa validity that is about 4 weeks, starts 12 days before I’m informed to collect passport.
-         visa issued one week after starting of its validity.
-         ignoring the intended date of travel (i.e. 2nd week of May 2k8) mentioned in the letter submitted along passport after winning the appeal.

I'm unable to travel because visa validity will be over before my intended date of travel and also less days in hand. Please reissue visa accordingly
my
intended date of travel. The same letter of intended date of travel is attached. 

Thanks & oblige

Sincerely

  

  
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Mister Micawber  #496947  Sun, 06 Apr 08 12:28 AM
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Dear Sirs,

 Subject: Visa Validity Issue  

I had intended to stay 4 weeks in Canada and applied for a visa for 4 weeks as well. However, there was a date mix-up ignoring my intended dates of travel. The details are: 

Visa is now valid from 22/03/08 until 21/04/08
It was issued on 29/03/08
I was advised to collect passport on 03/04/08. 

The issue is that:

-        the visa validity of about 4 weeks, starts 12 days before I was advised to collect passport.
-        the visa was issued one week after the first day of its validity.
-        the visa ignores my intended dates of travel (i.e. 2nd week of May 2008) mentioned in the letter submitted along with my passport after winning the appeal.

I'm unable to travel because the visa will be invalid before my intended date of travel; it also permits of fewer days than requested. Please reissue visa to accord with my intended dates of travel. The original letter of intended dates of travel is attached. 

Thank you very much for your efforts on my behalf.

Sincerely yours,


  
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mzca  #497029  Sun, 06 Apr 08 07:27 AM

Hey Boss!

Thanks alot for your efforts. I appreciate!  

Is not some thing  like that we are telling a story so present tense is used.
I am advised to collect passport on.. (I)

I was
advised to collect passport on (I don't know if it is an official style(?))


REgards,

Mansour Awan

  
Mister Micawber  #497036  Sun, 06 Apr 08 07:57 AM
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I was advised is OK.
  
mzca  #497156  Sun, 06 Apr 08 01:33 PM

Alright,

Thanks

 

  
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