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Latest post Mon, Nov 29 2004 7:19 PM by desIGOR. 1 replies.
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desIGOR
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Mon, 29 Nov 04 07:19 PM
Here is my resume excluding private information.
Please check it and answer me about mistakes.
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- NAME -
- OBJECTIVE -
Regional Sales Manager
– RELEVANT EXPERIENCE –
? Highly organized and creative professional able to develop creative marketing strategies and contribute to productive
work environment
? Coordinated the special project: butcher's shops chain in the Barnaul’s markets
? Handled 75% accounts for printing-house
? Oversee budgets and expenses
? Wrote successful proposals
? Composed press releases and public service announcements
? Counseled customers in the areas of publish quality control and compromise settlement
? Supervised site www.roskolbas.ru
? Produced posters, logos, brochures, and ads for a variety of companies and organizations
? Wrote, edited, and designed reports, work plans
? Handled copyediting duties for local newspaper
? Developed concepts and goals with clients
? Served as liaison between client and account executives
? Two years’ experience as an editor-in-chief
– EMPLOYMENT HISTORY –
? Designer, Special projects manager, Marketing Department OOO “RIKI”, 2004-present
? Designer-manager, printing office ZAO “Altaiskaya yarmarka”, 2003
? Designer, “Prestige” publishing house, 2002-2003
? Editor-in-chief, Newspaper of the Western Siberian railroad “Lokomotivschik Altaya”, 2000-2002
? Editor-in-chief, Newspaper of the Russian Party of Social Democracy “Kopeika”,
2000-2002
? Freelance Designer, 2000-present
? Designer, Regional Department of the Russian centrist party “Medved”, 1999-2000
– EDUCATION –
? Design department, Altai State University of Art and Culture, 3 courses, course leader
? Journalism department, Altai State University, 3 courses, course leader
– HONORS –
Conference of Young Scientists, Second Place, 2002
– REFERENCES –
Writing samples and references are available on request
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"Barnaul" is the town there I live.
I want this work very much and I will be very thankful if you helped me.
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Mon, 29 Nov 04 08:45 PM
Overall, very good...here are my comments....
- Name -
- Objectives -
Regional Sales Manager
– Key Skills and Attributes –
(Tell me what you are good at.)
• Superior strategy and organizational skills
• Able to interact with senior management
• Work effectively within a team environment
• Strong analytical and computational skills
• Fluent in both English and Russian
• Excellent people and time management skills
• Able to help parties mediate their differences
• Strong artistic flair
• Etc. (don’t use etc., but rather add whatever you think is appropriate)
– Recent Accomplishments – (now give me examples… “x” indicates a change)
• (need to make it an accomplishment or make it a key skill) Highly organized and creative professional able to develop creative marketing strategies and contribute to productive work environment
• Coordinated the special project: butcher's shops chain in the Barnaul’s markets
• xHandled 75% of the accounts for printing house (not sure about this one...printing house, no hyphen)
• xOversaw budgets and expenses worth $...or whatever currency
• xWrote successful proposals for what
• Composed press releases and public service announcements
• Counseled customers in the areas of publish quality control [not sure what you mean] and settlement
• xSupervised site www.roskolbas.ru development
• Produced posters, logos, brochures, and ads for a variety of companies and organizations
• xWrote, edited, and designed reports and work plans
• xHandled copyediting duties for the/a local newspaper
• Developed concepts and goals with clients
• Served as liaison between client and account executives
• xTwo years’ experience as an editor-in-chief for ABC newspaper
– EMPLOYMENT HISTORY – “x” denotes a change
• Designer, Special projects manager, Marketing Department OOO “RIKI”, 2004-present
• Designer-manager, printing office ZAO “Altaiskaya yarmarka”, 2003
• Designer, “Prestige” publishing house, 2002-2003
• Editor-in-chief, Newspaper of the Western Siberian railroad “Lokomotivschik Altaya”, 2000-2002
• xEditor-in-chief, Newspaper of the Russian Party of Social Democracy “Kopeika”, 2000-2002 (Careful with political affiliations in case the other person supports a different party)
• Freelance Designer, 2000-present
• xDesigner, Regional Department of the Russian centrist party “Medved”, 1999-2000 (Careful with political affiliations in case the other person supports a different party)
– EDUCATION –
-- Design department, Altai State University of Art and Culture, 3 courses, course leader
-- Journalism department, Altai State University, 3 courses, course leader
– HONORS –
Conference of Young Scientists, Second Place, 2002
– REFERENCES –
Writing samples and references are available on request
Joined on
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