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Creativeguru  #489973  Mon, 17 Mar 08 05:33 PM
The oriental Hotel nestled in the midst of lust greenery. Surrounding soothes your senses, which makes your mind calm and cool, it helps you to come up with great ideas to chalk out perfect business plans and strategies. An idea place for company’s annual meetings, conferences and other business activities
  
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Feebs11  #489985  Mon, 17 Mar 08 06:19 PM
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The oriental Hotel  [Is this the name of a hotel? If so, you need to capitalise both words;if not, neither needs a capital letter]'nestles in the midst of lust lush greenery. Surrounding soothes Peaceful surroundings sooth your senses, which makes and make your mind calm and cool, helping you to come up with great ideas to chalk out for perfect business plans and strategies. An idea ideal place for a/your company’s annual meetings, conferences and other business activities
 
  
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Creativeguru  #489993  Mon, 17 Mar 08 06:29 PM

thanks feebs for pointing my mistakes to help me improve

  
Marius Hancu  #489997  Mon, 17 Mar 08 06:31 PM
Yes, the Oriental Hotel is a famous hotel in Bangkok, Thailand, immortalized in many a piece of literature. 

There are of course others throughout the world with the same name.  

 http://www.mandarinoriental.com/bangkok/

  
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