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changeling  #533729  Sat, 28 Jun 08 02:28 PM
Hi everybody!

Will you, please, help me to check the following sentences or make them sound better.

Stuffed vine leaves are rich and tasty. Make them for special occasion, or just add a twist to your everyday menu. Of course, this dish will require some fuss, but it's worth the effort. Stuffed vine leaves supply many nutrients our body needs. Meat, rice and vegetables work together to create terrific taste. Vine leaves give it this special and unique flavor


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Mr Wordy  #534125  Sun, 29 Jun 08 12:14 PM

Stuffed vine leaves are rich and tasty. Make them for a special occasion, or just add a twist to your everyday menu. Of course, this dish will require some fuss, but it's worth the effort. Stuffed vine leaves supply many nutrients our body needs. [If you stuff them with things that supply many of those nutrients, then yes, obviously. If that's all you mean then I don't think it's worth saying. If you mean the vine leaves themselves supply many nutrients then I think this needs to come across more clearly.] As a stuffing, [?? I feel this sentence needs to link in a bit better with what came before] meat, rice and vegetables work together to create a terrific taste. Vine leaves give it this give them a special and unique flavor.

  
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