Hello teachers!
I've done my writing homework about the most impressive place I've visited.
It's kind of blog style.
Please check the grammar.
Thanks in advance!
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The greatest building in the world.
29-8-2008
It was an incredibly sunny day that I needed to wear a long sleeve t-shirt not to be burn. From yesterday, I had butterflies in my stomach with high expectations of watching the Eiffel Tower. I took off the bus and right across the street, there was that, the Eiffel Tower!!! I was told that the Eiffel Tower is not a great building but just a big metal and pointy. However, it was an amazing structure to me that I cannot take off my eyes of it! Suddenly I came up with this thinking. If I was here with my mom, I would be much happier than now. I'm quiet sure that she and I would hug each other and make a fuss. After taking some great pictures with my friend, I decided to come here again in a few years with my boy-friend. After half an hour, it was a great pity that I need to leave there. It was hard to fight back my tears even.
I realized that no matter what people say,
it is nevertheless the truth what I'm seeing. You know what? The Eiffel Tower is the greatest building in the world ever.