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Latest post Wed, Sep 24 2008 12:11 AM by yizhivika. 1 replies.
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Ellisa  +  569410 Tue, 23 Sep 08 06:34 AM
Hello teachers!
I've done my  writing homework about the most impressive place I've visited.
It's kind of blog style.
Please check the grammar.
Thanks in advance!

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The greatest building in the world.

29-8-2008

It was an incredibly sunny day that I needed to wear a long sleeve t-shirt not to be burn. From yesterday, I had butterflies in my stomach with high expectations of watching the Eiffel Tower. I took off the bus and right across the street, there was that, the Eiffel Tower!!! I was told that the Eiffel Tower is not a great building but just a big metal and pointy. However, it was an amazing structure to me that I cannot take off my eyes of it! Suddenly I came up with this thinking. If I was here with my mom, I would be much happier than now. I'm quiet sure that she and I would hug each other and make a fuss. After taking some great pictures with my friend, I decided to come here again in a few years with my boy-friend. After half an hour, it was a great pity that I need to leave there. It was hard to fight back my tears even.

I realized that no matter what people say,

it is nevertheless the truth what I'm seeing. You know what? The Eiffel Tower is the greatest building in the world ever.


 

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yizhivika  +  569705 Wed, 24 Sep 08 12:11 AM
Hi,

The greatest building in the world.

29-8-2008

It was such an incredibly sunny day that I needed to wear a long sleeved t-shirt so as not to be burnt. From Since yesterday, I'd had butterflies in my stomach, with high expectations of watching seeing the Eiffel Tower. I took had got off the bus and, there, right across the street, there it was that, the Eiffel Tower!!! I was had been told that the Eiffel Tower is not a great building, but just a big, metal, and pointy one. However, it was such an amazing structure to me that I cannot could not take off my eyes of it! Suddenly, this thought I came up with this thinking to me. If I was had been here with my mom, I would have been much happier than I was now. I'm quiet I was quite sure that she and I would have hugged each other and make made a fuss. After taking some great pictures with my friend, I decided to I would come here again in a few years' time with my boy-friend. After being there for half an hour, it was a great pity that I needed (or had) to leave there. It was hard to fight back my tears even.

I realized that no matter what people say,

it is nevertheless the truth true what I'm was seeing. You know what? The Eiffel Tower is the greatest building in the world ever.

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