uktous  +  960925 Tue, 03 Nov 09 07:56 PM hi, The following sentence is in the career history in my CV. It is to describe previous job which sentence should be grammatically correct? I needed to pay meticulous attention to detail when checked data and documents I needed to pay meticulous attention to detail when I checked data and documents I needed to pay meticulous attention to detail when checking data and documents thanks uktous Joined on Mon, Oct 26 2009 Full Member 116 Sentences

	Clive  +  961026 Tue, 03 Nov 09 10:51 PM Hi, The following sentence is in the career history in my CV. It is to describe previous job which sentence should be grammatically correct? I needed to pay meticulous attention to detail when checked data and documents I needed to pay meticulous attention to detail when I checked data and documents I needed to pay meticulous attention to detail when checking data and documents   Usually, the pronoun 'I' is not used in CV's.  Point form is used instead of full sentences. Say  Paid meticulous attention to detail when checking data and documents   Clive   Clive Joined on Thu, Oct 28 2004 Canada Veteran Member 29,679 El tango argentino es un pensamiento triste que se puede bailar (The tango argentino is a sad thought which can be danced) Enrique Santos Discépolo Pronouns, Sentences

	uktous  +  961113 Wed, 04 Nov 09 02:29 AM hi, clive is it possible to tell me why your sentence is correct? "when checking data and documents" is not a complete sentence uktous Sentences

	Clive  +  961199 Wed, 04 Nov 09 04:38 AM Hi, is it possible to tell me why your sentence is correct? "when checking data and documents" is not a complete sentence True, it's a phrase. Here are some other phrases that use 'when'. When in Rome, do as the Romans do. (a famous saying) When in London, I live in a hotel. Please turn off the machine when finished. If you like, you can consider them as reduced forms of longer clauses.   Best wishes, Clive Clive Clauses, Sentences, Writing