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Latest post Tue, Jan 9 2007 12:36 PM by Cool Breeze. 2 replies.
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Anonymous  +  312781 Mon, 08 Jan 07 07:27 PM

Please reply to my question re clauses:

Classify the highlighted clause in the following sentences:

As a woman, the results of the study are a little bit depressing,

Aged 30, it was my looks which attracted by husband

Thank you

Boris

Marius Hancu  +  313023 Tue, 09 Jan 07 12:33 PM
I think we're dealing with some absolute constructions here. See:

http://www.bartleby.com/64/C001/001.html
http://www.bartleby.com/68/39/39.html
http://thegrammarexchange.infopop.cc/eve/forums/a/tpc/f/340600179/m/5921010724

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Cool Breeze  +  313024 Tue, 09 Jan 07 12:36 PM
 Anonymous wrote:

As a woman, the results of the study are a little bit depressing,

Aged 30, it was my looks which attracted my husband


The highlighted parts are not clauses. To my mind they are incorrect clause equivalents. Logic and common sense tells me that they are meant to express a reason:
Because I am a woman, I find the results of the study a little bit depressing.
Because I was 30 years old, my looks attracted my husband.


Clause equivalents are one of the grammatically most inconsistent features  of English grammar, and quite a few structures that are in fact ungrammatical have become accepted  "correct" usage. If we begin a sentence with as a woman, the next word should be its subject:
As a woman, I don't like such behaviour at all.

The results (of the study) can't be a woman, that's what is basically wrong with the first sentence. The second sentence is a little better and many would consider it correct because my looks can perhaps be said to be 30 years old. However, we don't usually say somebody's looks are 30 years old. We say the person is 30 years old, that's why I don't particularly like even the second sentence.

Cheers
CB
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