Cliched business letter , how to change ?

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nayeem19

#99932 Mon, 16 May 05 06:29 AM

Here's the ending of a business letter I think which is cliched and needs to be changed :

" With the context to the above & as per contract may the undersigned request you for payment of 2 % of total contract fee at your earliest convenience by cheque ."

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MrPedantic

#99947 Mon, 16 May 05 08:03 AM

One suggestion:

'Further to the above, and in accordance with the contract, please send a cheque for $XXX (2% of the contractual fee) at your earliest convenience.'

Still full of clichés, though, I'm afraid.

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