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Anonymous  #188037  Tue, 24 Jan 06 03:13 PM
Cloud you please send me your bank details for your expense payment
  
Danyoo  #188194  Tue, 24 Jan 06 07:20 PM

Hi.  I am not exactly your what you are trying to say.  That's probably the reason that is keeping others responding to your question.  But if I may, I would say something like:

Could you please send me the expense details for your reimbursement.

  
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Clive  #188352  Tue, 24 Jan 06 10:43 PM

Hi,

Cloud you please send me your bank details for your expense payment
 
I read this as asking me for details of my bank account, so that a payment can be sent direct to my bank. It sounds a bit odd to me, as in my experience such one-time payments are not handled in this way, but anyway, assuming that's correct, I'd say something like this:
 
Could you please send me your banking information so that I can process your expense payment?
 
Best wishes, Clive
  
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