This following is a cloze passage for year 2 pupils. Could someone please edit it? Any suggestions to improve the passage are welcome. Thanks in advance.
One evening, after school, I was waiting for my father to fetch me. It was half past six and yet he had not arrived. Soon I was crying.
My form teacher asked my why and I told her about my problem. She told me not to worry.
Just then somebody tapped me on the right shoulder. I turned around. It was my father. He explained that one of his car tyres had punctured, and he was delayed by the changing of tyres.