College motivation letter, Help please

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Leven  #448850  Sun, 02 Dec 07 01:42 PM
To be considered for an interview for the college I want to go to I need to write a letter of motivation. I've never written a letter like this before, so I could use some help. I have to at least touch upon these points:
  • Why would you like to study at University College?
  • What field(s) of studies do you find most interesting and why?
  • Do you have any relevant working experience or social activities?
  • What are your interests with regard to (or regardless of) your current education?
  • What are your plans after finishing University College?
This is what I have (I think I might have ranted too much):

Dear Sir or Madam,

A little over a year ago University College caught my attention.  As a 6 VWO student I know that making the right decision is difficult and I wanted to weigh my options carefully. But after visiting the campus and the open day I knew I wanted to apply.

I have spent most of my life trying to tell stories in one form or another. Whether it be through writing, art or music. I started doing theatre when I was 11 and musical theatre not much later. I learned to play the piano because I wanted to accompany myself. Recently I have begun making short films and have become increasingly interested in screenwriting.

From my love of stories stems my love for the English language. Like most people, I was exposed to English through computers and television when I was young. When I started High School I discovered how much I could do with the language I had learned over the years and it quickly became all I did. I started writing and reading stories in primarily English and, thanks to a friend with a similar affinity, I started speaking it daily as well. It is the fact that the entire program at University College is in English that first drew me to it.

I know I want to do something with writing one day, but I have never felt like it was something I should study in 3 to 4 years. Writing, to me, is more that just putting words on paper and using proper grammar. Writing is imagination; it combines history, psychology and so many other aspects of life. The broad curriculum of a Liberal Arts and Sciences college is so much less constricting than the regular programs at other Dutch universities. There is no other kind of school where I can study all the things I feel I want to learn. I’m interested in many different things and I find it difficult to choose only one field to study. University College gives me the opportunity to expand my horizons without fear of neglecting my chosen field. Both Social Science and Humanities are interesting to me, because they both contain fields about what makes people and cultures the way they are. In Social Science it is especially psychology that interests me and in Humanities it is literature.

I planned to attend college in the US for some time, but I realized that I wasn’t ready for it yet. I am sure want to get my Masters degree abroad though, in what or where I haven’t decided, but I do know I want to see and learn more of the world than just what The Netherlands has to offer me. University College is the perfect place for me to prepare for the rest of the world, because it has such an international focus. Hopefully I will one day be able to make my mark as a writer, and possibly filmmaker, somewhere in the world. But before I can do that I have a lot to learn.

I hope this letter managed to convey to you who am I and why I wish to attend University College. Thank you for considering my application and I look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Diantha Vliet


Thanks or your help, in advance.
  
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