Comma needed here?

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Anonymous  #232885  Tue, 06 Jun 06 08:34 AM

When a situation is getting me down, I know that it will be short-lived and make for an entertaining story later on.

Would a comma be appropriate after short-lived to make a pause suitable, or is this sentence fine as is?

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Mister Micawber  #233011  Tue, 06 Jun 06 03:28 PM

Strictly speaking, a comma should precede the and.  In shorter compounds it can be dispensed with, but here I think you need it.

  
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Believer  #233032  Tue, 06 Jun 06 04:41 PM

Thank you, Mister M.

I think your response is givng the impression of contraction by the fact of you are using the phrase "strictly speaking" and "I think" in the same response to a particular question.

Anyway, why did you say a comma should precede the and, strictly speaking. Are there any rules of grammar you are basing your conclusion/recommendation on?

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Mahlon  #233118  Tue, 06 Jun 06 09:15 PM
I see no reason for inserting a comma after "short-lived."  Although I generally like commas, I believe that if you can avoid using one, do so. 
  
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Mister Micawber  #233171  Wed, 07 Jun 06 12:46 AM

No, I have changed my mind-- the comma is not strictly needed before the and, since the conjunction does not introduce an independent clause.  However, I would still use it because I would wish to emphasize the sequence of events:  (1) it will be short-lived, and then (2) it will be entertaining.  If the depressing situation is not short-lived, it will have no entertainment value.  The comma, as a pause, lets the reader consider each aspect individually.

  
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