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Anonymous  #385557  Fri, 29 Jun 07 01:43 AM

Hi,

When you have sentences that have phrases like 'for example' or 'that is' as a part of your sentence, would you resort to using a comma or a dash (or a pair of dashes)? Normally, it seems to be recommended that a comma is to be used ,and I tried to find more examples of such comma usage online but very little information seem to be available. Help.

He has some tools he can use to build a dog house at home, for example a wrench and a plier.       

But if the underlined part is set in the middle of the sentence, I am not sure a comma would be all that perfect.

Some tools he has at home, for example, a wrench and a plier, can be used to build a dog house. 

For emphasis (for whatever reason), a pair of dashes can be used.

Some tools he has at home -- for example, a wrench and a plier, can be used to build a dog house.    

Can you give me some examples with 'that is'?

  
Feebs11  #385677  Fri, 29 Jun 07 11:35 AM
 Anonymous wrote:

Hi,

When you have sentences that have phrases like 'for example' or 'that is' as a part of your sentence, would you resort to using a comma or a dash (or a pair of dashes)? Normally, it seems to be recommended that a comma is to be used ,and I tried to find more examples of such comma usage online but very little information seem to be available. Help.

He has some tools he can use to build a dog house at home, for example a wrench and a plier.       

But if the underlined part is set in the middle of the sentence, I am not sure a comma would be all that perfect.

Some tools he has at home, for example, a wrench and a plier, can be used to build a dog house. 

For emphasis (for whatever reason), a pair of dashes can be used.

Some tools he has at home -- for example, a wrench and a plier, can be used to build a dog house.    

Can you give me some examples with 'that is'?



Using a dash in the way you have is not really good practice, and if you do use them, there ought to be a following one. I would have used brackets rather than commas or dashes.

Some tools he has at home (for example, a wrench and a plier) can be used to build a dog house.

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Anonymous  #386088  Sat, 30 Jun 07 04:50 AM

Thank you, Feebs11

Did you mean 'parentheses', not 'brackets'? Those punctuation marks you put around seem to be paretheses. 

Would you say this use of a comma, where you place a comma at the end of sentence, would be correct or good?

He has some tools he can use to build a dog house at home, for example a wrench and a plier.

I do seem to see this type of comma usage in dictionaries a lot.  

  
Feebs11  #386203  Sat, 30 Jun 07 11:07 AM
parentheses = brackets= parentheses - it is the same thing.

Would you say this use of a comma, where you place a comma at the end of a/the sentence, would be correct or good?  If you mean within this sentence, then, yes, it is correct.
He has some tools he can use to build a dog house at home, for example a wrench and a plier.  It is also correct here.

  
Clive  #386380  Sat, 30 Jun 07 10:13 PM

Hi,

Here's a vey small off-topic note.

Don't say a plier. Pliers are like scissors, eg a pair of pliers, some pliers.

Best wishes, Clive

  
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Anonymous  #386821  Mon, 02 Jul 07 02:31 AM

Thank you, Feebs11

Would you say this is an example of good comma usage? Permit me to add one more element. 

He has some tools he can use at home, for example, a wrench,  saw and pair of plier, to build a dog house.

Too many commas would distract the reading effort, wouldn't it? 

It would be better to write:

He has some tools he can use at home -- for example, a wrench, saw and pair of plier, to build a dog house.   

Sorry to ask many questions but would you place a comma after 'for example'?

  
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