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Anonymous  #312876  Tue, 09 Jan 07 02:44 AM

Hi there,

Can anyone help me with the following sentence? Although some have given me explanations, I still don't understand why there is a comma before 'though'? Then when we should and should not put a comma before the words 'although', 'though', 'because' when they are placed to join two sentences together. Please help.

Thanks in advance.

Aspiring to be an advanced knowledge economy, Beijing needs the great majority, if not all, of our students to success, academically and professionally, though individuals may attain achievement at differeent paces.

Simon

  
Philip  #312888  Tue, 09 Jan 07 03:08 AM
 Anonymous wrote:

Hi there,

Can anyone help me with the following sentence? Although some have given me explanations, I still don't understand why there is a comma before 'though'? Then when we should and should not put a comma before the words 'although', 'though', 'because' when they are placed to join two sentences together. Please help.

Thanks in advance.

Aspiring to be an advanced knowledge economy, Beijing needs the great majority, if not all, of our students to success, academically and professionally, though individuals may attain achievement at differeent paces.

Simon

A quick answer, though not necessarily the ultimate.  You have several phrases, and the last needs to separated from them.  Success should be "succeed", the verb
  
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Anonymous  #312902  Tue, 09 Jan 07 03:52 AM

Hi there

So do you mean in normal situations, the comma before 'though' should not be there. Since there are several phrases in the sentence, it is better to separate them by using a comma.

Simon

  
Marius Hancu  #313020  Tue, 09 Jan 07 12:02 PM
I'd say that if you don't have a that before though or even though, you need the comma.

It's a paranthesis, a secondary argument, and it must be separated.

See examples here:
http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&q=%22though+individuals%22+&btnG=Google+Search
  
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Anonymous  #482902  Thu, 28 Feb 08 09:40 PM

You should put a comma before "though," because the words following it is an independent clause (it has both a subject and a verb). However, the sentence, overall, is incorrect because it's a type of run-on called a comma splice.

  
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