How to use comma and other signs

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Anonymous  #121835  Wed, 27 Jul 05 04:15 PM
I hope you can help me with this sentence, my question is; is the ; , and - correct

During my dissertation I developed my interviewing skills further(<img src="/emoticons/emotion-5.gif" alt="Wink [;)]" /> I constructed an interview protocol, conducted and transcribed six one(-)hour(-)long semi-structured interviews and analysed this textual data in accordance with Grounded Theory.
  
Anonymous  #121875  Wed, 27 Jul 05 07:06 PM
Ok that looked pretty weird. Let's try again.

I developed my interviewing skills further; I constructed an interview protocol, conducted and transcribed one-hour semi-structured interviews and analysed the data in accordance with Grounded Theory.
  
Mister Micawber  #122042  Thu, 28 Jul 05 09:38 AM

It looks fine.  Options which I myself would exercise are (1) replacing the semicolon with a full colon ( : ) and (2) placing a comma after interviews (this is called for if the 'listed' items are sufficiently long or convoluted).


  
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