Is a comma in this situation needed?

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Anonymous  #395852  Mon, 23 Jul 07 10:54 PM

I was always under that impression that in order to sell a screenplay, it had to be the complete package.

Thanks.

  
Clive  #395859  Mon, 23 Jul 07 11:16 PM

Hi,

I was always under that impression that in order to sell a screenplay, it had to be the complete package.

I would write it as either

I was always under that impression that in order to sell a screenplay it had to be the complete package

or

I was always under that impression that, in order to sell a screenplay, it had to be the complete package.

Best wishes, Clive

  
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