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Anonymous  +  948775 Wed, 21 Oct 09 08:10 AM
I'm checking my work and I want to know if I have done them correctly?

 

If you're looking for the biggest drop, the Top Thrill Dragster has that distinction, too.    (OK)

 

Most of the world's record-setting roller coasters were opened between 2000 and 2003 thrill-seekers hope they'll continue to get faster and steeper.    (RUN-ON)

 

Riders rocket out of a starting gate they reach a speed of 120 miles per hour in four seconds.  (RUN-ON)

 

The largest drop on the Top Thrill Dragster is 400 feet, compare that to the largest drop on a wooden coaster, which is only 214 feet.   (COMMA SPLICE)

 

The longest roller coaster ride of them all is the Steel Dragon 2000 in Japan, that coaster is 8,133 feet long.    (COMMA SPLICE)

 

The second-fastest roller coaster is in Japan, it goes a mere 106.8 miles per hour.  (COMMA SPLICE)

 

The steepest wooden coasters average about 55 degrees as a matter of fact, the steepest of all is only 61 degrees.  (RUN-ON)

 

The world's fastest steel-track roller-coaster is the Top Thrill Dragster, its at the Cedar Point Amusement Park in Ohio.   (COMMA SPLICE)

 

Wooden roller coasters are downright pokey in comparison the fastest reaches speeds of only 78.3 miles per hour.  (RUN-ON)

 

You want the steepest angle of descent, you can choose from several steel-track coasters that allow you to plummet downward at a 90-degree angle.    (OK)

 

Can you tell if I did well?

 

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