Commas and brackets (parentheses)

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Anonymous  #473586  Wed, 06 Feb 08 10:08 PM

Hi everybody.

I've written a document and the reviewer has indicated that I should have a comma before and after my brackets. For example: "another job (listed in TOAD) which is..." becomes "another job, (listed in TOAD), which is...".

Is this grammatically correct?

Thanks,

Gil

  
Clive  #473592  Wed, 06 Feb 08 10:30 PM

Hi,

I've written a document and the reviewer has indicated that I should have a comma before and after my brackets. For example: "another job (listed in TOAD) which is..." becomes "another job, (listed in TOAD), which is...".

Is this grammatically correct?

It's a question of style rather than of grammar. I'd prefer to omit the commas, as it seems to me less disruptive to the readrer's eye and mind when reading the sentence. Commas represent brief pauses, and I think the reader will also naturally pause briefly at a bracket.

Best wishes, Clive

  
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Futurehuman11  #473641  Thu, 07 Feb 08 02:24 AM

The brackets already show that the clause is parenthetical, so the commas are pointless. 

  
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Yoong Liat  #473887  Thu, 07 Feb 08 02:14 PM
 Futurehuman11 wrote:

The brackets already show that the clause is parenthetical, so the commas are pointless. 

I agree.

To me, another job (listed in TOAD) which is... is correct (no commas are required.)

If you insert a comma after 'job' and after the outer bracket, you are inserting unnecessary punctuation marks.

For example, John, as well as Peter, is going to the movies is correct.

If you insert commas, the sentence becomes John, (as well as Peter), is going to the movies. (It is obvious from this sentence that commas shouldn't be inserted in the sentence posted by you.)

  
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Anonymous  #566093  Mon, 15 Sep 08 01:18 AM
No, it is not correct. The reviewer is clearly not an English teacher and is what ias referred to as "comma happy." The use of parentheses is becoming passe. Usually in informal writiting using commas are accepted and appreciated. Your sentence should read, "Another job, listed in Toad," Regardless of the rest of the sentence, whatever TOAD is does not need to be marked off by parentheses.
 
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