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deanpijin  #256992  Fri, 18 Aug 06 04:26 AM

Would somebody please help me with my sentences.

1) In the US, in 1999, X et al. (13) evaluated statements made by pharmaceutical representatives during 13 presentations and found that 15% of 100 statements made by sales representatives in their presentations were inaccurate and provided favourable impression towards the promoted drug.

2) They found that adverse effects were mentioned in 27% of the presentations and contraindications were not mentioned, and use in pregnancy was only mentioned on one occasion.

Regards,

Dean

  
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Clive  #257281  Sat, 19 Aug 06 05:49 AM

Hi Dean,

1) In the US, in 1999, X et al. (13) << ? evaluated statements made by pharmaceutical representatives during 13 presentations and found that 15 out of 100 were inaccurate yet provided a favourable impression of the promoted drug.

2) They found that adverse effects were mentioned in 27% of the presentations and contraindications were not mentioned, and use in pregnancy was only mentioned on one occasion.

Best wishes, Clive

  
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deanpijin  #260030  Mon, 28 Aug 06 03:50 AM

Thanks Clive.

Regards,

Dean

  
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