1. he has two thousand a hundred students
2. I have an important thing to tell you
3. Do you want any other thing?
4. The teacher has so many things to tell me
5. He knows many things about basketball.
6. Bob loves the sound of children’s laughters.
7. My examination results were just like I expected.
8. Everybody wished me a good luck.
9. It was good luck for you that the class was canceled.
10. My family eats many vegetables.
11.
12. He asked her to marry with him?
13. May be she’s decided not to come.
14. The teacher did not mention about the number of students who failed the examination.
15. In my last job I must wear a tie.
16. My teacher, Bob, is from Canadian nationality.
17. The teacher came near her and asked her to describe what she had seen.
18. She drove the car to a near garage.
19. I slept very little and ate nearly nothing.
20. It is no need to clock the door.
21. Needless for me to say, these highly skilled workers are in great demand.
22. Needless to say that many students have complained about these classes.
23. I’ve just received a very good news.
24. Nobody were allowed to bring copied books to school.
25. No matter you have a lot of experience, qualifications are essential.
26. None of the two applicants had suitable qualifications.

All of the sentences are correct or not? could you revise my sentences and give me your corrections?

Thanks
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I don't think we should, Lee Young, because it appears to be homework. We would prefer it if you would make the effort to decide which are correct, and try to revise the incorrect ones yourself; then we will be happy to check your answers.
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1. he has two thousand one hundred students
2. I have something important to tell you
3. Do you want anything else?
4. The teacher has lots of things to tell me
5. He knows a lot about basketball.
6. Bob loves the sound of the children’s laughter.
7. My examination results were just as I expected.
8. Everybody wished me good luck.
9. Lucky for you that the class was cancelled.
10. My family eats a lot of vegetables.
( much and many are usually used in questions and negatives)
12. He asked her to marry him?
13. Maybe she’s decided not to come.
14. The teacher did not mention the number of students who had failed the examination.
15. In my last job I had to wear a tie.
16. My teacher, Bob, is Canadian.
17. The teacher came up to her and asked her to describe what she had seen.
18. She drove the car to a nearby garage.
19. I slept very little and ate hardly anything.
20. There is no need to lock the door.
21. Needless to say, these highly skilled workers are in great demand.
22. Needless to say , many students have complained about these classes.
23. I’ve just received some very good news.
24. Nobody was allowed to bring copied books to school.
25. It doesn't matter if you have a lot of experience, qualifications are essential.
26. Neither of the two applicants had suitable qualifications.
To Mister Micawber,
How about these sentences? What do you think?
1. Is t really possible to judge someone character his or her face?
2. Chinese seem to think so.
3. Over 2000 year practise Siang Mien’s art judge the characteristic to predict fortune the analysis of face.
4. It has developed ancient imperial court in China consisting of Jealous guarded secrets passed the master of few chosen apprentices.
5. The secrets of face analysis are hidden away from special books, just only a very few looks
6. These secrets have found that well guarded must have got out because practically all Chinese practise come from the face analysis.
7. Mothers tell daughters or men in flat noses with small ear lobes have made shy rather dull husbands.
8. So how does this analysis work?
9. Well start people faces are classify according to one to ten basic shades. For each has its own special name.
10. The triangular face is example of calling fire face.
11. One square is known wall-face while one diamond shape fade-face.
12. There are even bucket-faces!
13. Once the basic shape decides, then parts of face eyes nose, chin, mouth have analyzed their turn.
14. People who are not conventional beautiful faces should not worry as ugly people tend lucky.
15. Anyway, let us see how Siang Mien work use Princess Diana for practical example.
16. At the beginning, we can say she is fade-face mean that she must be strong-willed.
17. This shade also belong to people who say that having difficult childhoods.
18. As I know, Princess parents divorced she is child this time must be period in great unhappiness.
19. Turning in more specific features that we see one eye a little larger than other.
20. I is known in fact people eyes are different sizes often brought up stepparents.
21. They also believed that charming is well capable of great jealousy.
22. W can see this photograph on top of her ears go above line her eyebrows.
23. People have high ears hers likely to become famous before age of 30 while those combine eyes in different sizes as lucky.

could you revise my sentences and give me your solutions
On the first set of 'Common Mistakes', Lee-- if your assignment is to make them colloquial, then you have done an excellent job. I would suggest only:

(19) I slept very little and ate almost nothing.

You did so well with the first set-- how about trying the second set too?
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this is my work, I have done that so please give me your opinion! Thanks!
Very curious, Lee-- if these are your work, then the previous set must NOT have been your work, since they were almost perfect, and these certainly are not even near perfect:

1. Is it really possible to judge someone's character by his or her face?
2. The Chinese seem to think so.
3. Over 2000 years of practice, Siang Mien’s art is to predict people's fortunes through the analysis of their faces.
4. It was developed in the ancient imperial court in China, and consists of jealously guarded secrets passed from the master to a few chosen apprentices.
5. The secrets of face analysis are hidden away in special books, where only a very few can look.
6. These secrets, although well guarded, must have got out, because practically all Chinese practice comes from face analysis.
7. Mothers tell their daughters that men with flat noses and small ear lobes make shy, rather dull husbands.
8. So how does this analysis work?
9. Well, to start with, people's faces are classified according to one to ten basic shades; each has its own special name.
10. The triangular face is an example called 'fire-face'.
11. A square one is known as 'wall-face', while a diamond-shapec one is called 'fade-face'.
12. There are even 'bucket-faces'!
13. Once the basic shape is decided, then parts of the face-- the eyes nose, chin, and mouth-- have to be analyzed in their turn.
14. People who do not have conventionally beautiful faces should not worry, as ugly people tend to be lucky.
15. Anyway, let us see how Siang Mien works, using Princess Diana for a practical example.
16. At the beginning, we can say she is 'fade-face' meaning that she must be strong-willed.
17. This shade also belongs to people who say that they had difficult childhoods.
18. As you know, Princess Diana's parents divorced when she was a child; this time must have been a period in great unhappiness.
19. Turning to more specific features, we see that one eye is a little larger than the other.
20. It is known, in fact, that people whose eyes are different sizes were often brought up by stepparents.
21. They also believe that charm is very capable of great jealousy.
22. We can see in this photograph that the top of her ears extend to above the line of her eyebrows.
23. People who have high ears like hers are likely to become famous before the age of 30, while those who combine eyes in different sizes are lucky.

Many of these were very difficult to understand exactly, Lee. The topic is interesting, however. I have a pie-face and two different ears-- what does that mean?
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