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Anonymous  #347038  Wed, 04 Apr 07 03:07 AM

Hello

I have written my company introduction. But, because I am not an English native spkear, I would like to post it here to ask for some correction. Could someone help to correct my writing(its is about two page in A4 size).

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Vnjporg  #347335  Thu, 05 Apr 07 02:04 AM

Sorry, this is my post but I forgot to login before posting. Here is some sentences I need your help to correct:

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Company name and our Ideology:

The name of our company is called VPlus, the V stands for Victory, Variety and Vietnam and the Plus is the way we above and beyond the call for our customers.

 

Our ideology is “to give a flexible response to various needs ” from our customers.

Along with the globalization trends, the world business market has become various. Our aim is to satisfy all off our customers by a flexible ways of thinking, with both high speed and great accuracy.

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Thanks in advance.

  
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Feebs11  #347440  Thu, 05 Apr 07 12:09 PM
 Vnjporg wrote:

Sorry, this is my post but I forgot to login before posting. Here is some sentences I need your help to correct:

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Company name and our Ideology:

The name of our company is called VPlus. The V stands for Victory, Variety and Vietnam, and the Plus is the way we go above and beyond the call of duty to our customers.

 

Our ideology is “to give a flexible response to various needs ” from our customers.  I would take out the quotation marks and change "to give", but rephrasing might be better - Our ideology is to provide a flexible response to our customers' needs.


Along with the globalization trends, the world business market has become various varied. Our aim is to satisfy all off of our customers by a flexible ways of thinking, with both high speed of response and great accuracy.

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Thanks in advance.



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Vnjporg  #347647  Fri, 06 Apr 07 01:38 AM

Thank you very much for your help.

I have a some more and I am happy if you can help to correct them agian. Here is it:

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Translation service:

Normally translate is defined “to turn from one language into another or from a foreign language into one's own”. And it seems that many companies consider language itself too important in providing translation and interpreter service. However, language can not exist without culture. We can not understand one language well without knowing about the cultural background which that language is spoken.

Our translator team member has a good background in culture and influent in translating/interpreter skill. We providing the following translation/ interpreter service:

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Consulting service:

To gain success in business between Japan and Vietnam, the most important thing is to overcome the differences in culture and languages of the two countries. However, this is not easy for many companies. VPlus with professional staff are confident in providing the following consulting service.

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IT solution:

Now a day is the time of IT. You can not have success without IT solution. In all kind of business, timely, quality, cost are the important things. With both high skill staff, strong connection to many foreign IT companies and experienced freelancers, Vplus are here to provide our customer the following service.

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