Anonymous:
Hi,

I am trying to write objective statement for an organisation but cant find the right words.

The company makes a software component and is hoping to build partnership with industry leaders and selling its component by embedding it with one of the products of the partner company.

This is what I have come up with so far.

"To gain credibility and sufficient revenue through building partnership with organisation with more than 60% market share and embedding our product with 70% of the totals unit sales of partner's product"

Any ideas/suggestions/comments for improvement ???

Thanks,
Anonymous:
My 2cents

Objective statement may be vary depend on what the purpose of your paper, if for partnership searching paper, it should be more benefited your partner or in win-win situations would be nice. If for building new company then it shuold focus more on your side.
but in this case, you are looking for parnership so the objective shud be either more on partner profitted or win-win

To gain credibility and sufficient revenue through building partnership with potential organisation. <--- take from yours

embedding our product with 70% of the totals unit sales of partner's product" <-- this one just profitted to you, your partner sure scared of this.

To enhance partner's market share by embedding our software component to partner's product <--- not sure the nicer way but something like that, maybe you can put how many percent their sales will go up if they embed your software.

thats for now Emotion: wink
Anonymous:
thank you, but i need the best ans regarding the company objectives
Hi Anon,

Your post is a bit confusing, since the post you replied to was extremely old.

Can you state your question a bit more clearly, please?
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Anonymous:
So far so good but there something missing in your statments! Make some more homework! Let me help you but unfortunately i don't have time right now, I'm also working on same as you.
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