(Pls help)Compare and Contract Essay.(pls help)

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Ming664413  #376554  Fri, 08 Jun 07 09:18 AM

Gender Differences and Similarities in Childhood

“Big boys do not cry” (Kommer D., 2006, p.249), so what is expected of big boys? Since genders are divided males and females, discriminations have been existing. Even though many employers or parents think that there are no different unbalance treatment to men and females, men, in fact, are treated unfairly not only in jobs but also at home. Fortunately, male are female children are treated equally at schools.

It looks fair between men and women, but men and women are treated not equally in some certain job positions. For example, in many restaurants, employers purely hire hostess, females, because employers want to use females to attract many men to come to the restaurant in order to earn more money. In contract, men hostess are viewed by the employers that men will probably scare customers because of their aggressive facial expression. Many parents, furthermore, merely trust females to look after their babies because women are viewed tenderer than men. Women are commonly viewed very patient to treat moody babies and not easily become angry at babies. Men are commonly viewed intolerant with babies, in contract. While babies are crying, men are viewed do not care and let the babies cry until the babies lose voice. Indeed, males have less jobs opportunities than women.

            Another difference between boys and girls are punishments from their parents during childhood.  Many adults have traditional perception of boys being physically and mentally stronger than girls. As a result, boys suffer worse penalties from their parents for refusing to conform to their given roles. If boys break free from their given roles, they will be punished, such as locked in their rooms and not given supper. Contradictory, girls are viewed as weak; thus, they cannot tolerate painful punishments. In general, girls are pictured to be more obedient, so if a girl does something wrong, she is expected to be treated with a kinder attitude from their parents.  For instance, if a girl breaks her mother’s mirror, her mother may think it is merely an accident and forgive her daughter. On the other hand, if the son breaks the mirror, he might get punished for his disobedience even though it is merely an accident.  In short, genders have already been judged differently in a kind of punishment.

            Even though self-perspective and chastisement are different between boys and girls, the way to study for boys and girls is similar at school. Both gifted male and female children are enthusiastic to answer questions when teachers ask. Also, they are active to ask questions when they face with a problem from assignments. For instance, when students of chemistry class have some problems on why hydrogen and oxygen can be combined together, the students will ask their chemistry teacher to explain it in depth until the students understand. Although the teacher may need to take a long time to explain it, and some students may feel disturbed by the students who ask questions during class time, the enthusiastic students will still continue to ask for clear explanations because it is very important for them to recognize every detail. In other words, boys are as well active as girls in class to pursue answers when they have trouble in their majors. All in all, both boys and girls are able to handle difficult problems if they are willing to seek clarification.

            In brief, even though males are having difficulties finding some jobs and extra chastisement from parents, there are still many admirable teachers pay high effort to teach both male and female students.

  
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Doll  #376892  Sat, 09 Jun 07 12:41 AM

Hi,   

Your introduction is wrong and I didn't check the other paragraphs.    

1) Inform us what you are going to discuss, pointing out whether you will compare, contrast or dompare and contrast, 

2) Either use blog by blog form or point by point form while writing your essay. Smile [:)]

  
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