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Jamalbajwa007  #336784  Wed, 07 Mar 07 10:30 PM

my assignment is to write a campare or contrast paragraph for traditional shopping Vs. online shopping.

is topic sentence correct!

 There are various differences between traditional shopping and online shopping.

if u have any suggestions plz let me know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  
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Clive  #336787  Wed, 07 Mar 07 10:34 PM
I already answered this in another thread. Clive
  
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Jamalbajwa007  #336789  Wed, 07 Mar 07 10:39 PM

well there are no similarities...actually its only a paragraph therefore i am going only for differences.plz tell me how many primary should i use can u suggest me an other primaries other than these listed below...by the way i am using alternative pattern!!!

Primaries

1. Choices

2. Conveniences

3. Pay online( i am not sure abt this one, how to say it)
  
Clive  #336793  Wed, 07 Mar 07 10:53 PM

Hi,

Maybe say

3. Payment methods

Best wishes, Clive
  
Jamalbajwa007  #336798  Wed, 07 Mar 07 10:57 PM

can u tell me that how online payment method is different than traditional payment...beacuse i am confused ..u can give credit card to both rite?
  
Jamalbajwa007  #336810  Wed, 07 Mar 07 11:35 PM

my assignment is to write a campare or contrast paragraph for traditional shopping Vs. online shopping.

   Well there are no similarities...actually its only a paragraph therefore i am going only for differences.plz tell me how many primary should i use can u suggest me an other primaries other than these listed below...by the way i am using alternative pattern!!!

+ can i use a primary like online shops are oopen 24Hrs as compared to traditional shops! and how can i say this? does this fall under the given primaries>?

Primaries

1. Choices

2. Conveniences

3. Pay online( i am not sure abt this one, how to say it)
  
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