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BW2/3  #235004  Sun, 11 Jun 06 07:42 PM

The new release dvd Syrianna costs twice as much as the dvd When Harry Met Sally.

The new release dvd Syrianna costs twice more than the dvd When Harry Met Sally.

Three times as many people as I expected to go to the church.

Three times more people than I hoped to go to the church.

Are above sentences ok ? if not, why ?

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Marius Hancu  #235005  Sun, 11 Jun 06 07:52 PM
1, 2 seem OK.

With past tense:

Three times as many people as I expected [as I had been expecting] went to the church.
Three times more people than I hoped [as I had hoped] went to the church.

IMO, the past perfect versions are better, as they establish the correct time sequence.

or with present tense:

Three times as many people as I've been expecting go [are going/coming these days] to the church.
Three times more people than I've hoped go to the church.


  
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BW2/3  #235014  Sun, 11 Jun 06 08:27 PM

Thank you Marius Hancu,

What is " IMO" ?

  
Grammar Geek  #235061  Mon, 12 Jun 06 12:13 AM

"new-release" should have a hyphen because it is modifying the DVD. And I think that DVD is still capitalized in current usage. When you want to name a book, movie, magazine name, etc. you should use italics if you can, or at least quotation marks.

The sentence "three times more people than I hoped go to the church" is okay, but your meaning is not clear. Did you hope for a minimum or a maximum?

I don't think that present perfect is needed in either "I've been expecting" or "I've hoped." Simply "as I expected" or "I hoped" would be fine, I believe.

  
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