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leeyoung
#48873 Mon, 04 Oct 04 03:47 AM
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1. There is no alternative
2. Two farmers need to say both expensive tractor and expensive threshing on the machine.
3. Neither can afford nor can buy both.
4. Both can afford to buy one.
5. So they agree to lend and they are machines from each other.
6. The government of underdeveloped countries finds certain areas that are rich and natural resources and has neither the capital nor expertising to exploit them.
7. Borrowing the ultimate profits is inevitable.
8. In small group, the young people have a good idea for new business and them but it in their local bank.
9. The bank carefully vet the idea may decide in advance for necessary starting capital.
10. Without the loan, few new businesses could begin.
11. Polonius’s advice had it in the points of 16th century. The safety merit is being as self-sufficient as possible.
12. In modern world, however, the creation of new wealth nearly always depends on initial use of other other people money.
Does these sentences incorrect? The use of work or grammar , structure of sentence....
how could I use the work "Mortage" correctly in E? correct it and give me some comments!
Thanks
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Mister Micawber
#48944 Mon, 04 Oct 04 01:11 PM
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Hi Lee,
I THINK I have retained your meanings in these amendations:
'1. There is no alternative.
2. Two farmers both need, say, an expensive tractor and an expensive threshing machine.
3. Neither can afford to buy both.
4. Both can afford to buy one.
5. So they agree to each buy one, and lend their machines to each other.
6. Underdeveloped countries discover certain areas that are rich with natural resources, but have neither the capital nor expertise to exploit them.
7. Borrowing in order to realize ultimate profit is inevitable.
8. A small group of young people have a good idea for a new business, and they propose it to their local bank.
9. The bank carefully vets the idea, and may decide to advance them the necessary start-up capital.
10. Without such a loan, few new businesses could begin.
11. Polonius’s advice in the 17th century had a point: safety is being as self-sufficient as possible.
12. In the modern world, however, the creation of new wealth nearly always depends on the initial use of other people's money.'
'How could I use the work "Mortgage" correctly in E?' Sorry, Lee, I cannot find E.
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