Pls help me out of this complicate GRAMMER

Hello Janice definitely I accept ur impressive offer . THANKS a lot . But first of all I want to promise u that I won’t give up and I’ll try my best . Bcoz I give up so easily .I have no constant effort to achieve something. But I won’t let it happen this time so I promise u Ok   

U said u’ll give me some speech so please……. 

And I’m not so good in writing letters or story so I’ve made sentences so please check them out . 

1.     Tomy was a drugs addict and alcoholic. Since he was 18 he used drugs and after few years he started to drink alcohol .He died with the blood poison only he was 21.  

2.     Mr Jones bought a new coat yesterday and he got stain when he had (when he was having) breakfast so I had to wash out .

3.     Jones said by the time he arrived and his mom had left  

4.     He said he seen the movie and he had gone out form cinema. Or He said he had seen the movie and he had gone out form cinema.

5.     I know my hair style was so ugly , lots of people told (said to )  me too .

Hello Clive

Sorry I was wrong , I meant  ‘Coma’ .

(5) I was been in coma for years .

And Clive will u please , show me 1 example with “ Had Been” ? U meant in the past 2 things first one have to use with Simple past tense and second one with had been .

Like –  They went home that time but I had been still working in the office .

Is it bad one ?

waiting for ur post

Thanks a lot .......?to

Who explained about have/had been. Now I'm clear but had been is still a bit difficult to use for me .Actually I'm making mistakes with present perfect .Coz both so smilar PP and PPC (present perfect continuous ) So I've made these execises please check

1. I had been waiting for her when her DAD's came
2. I had been phoning when she slipped .
3. When she went I had been sleeping .

Waiting for correction posts

Thanks again

Ok

1. I was waiting for her when her dad came .
2. I was phoning when she slipped .
3. When she went I was in asleep .
4. She told me the story and  i was shorked
5. When the police came theif was gone . or theif has gone, went gone .

I've made 5 .Actually I want to make some more difficult sentences with past tense, could u give me some hint ?

And could u please teach me some  reported speech  ? I'm very bad in that .

zara

Sorry I was so stupid ,  ok  

I’ll answer some of ur questions form ur sentences

Urs , "So how did she fall over the edge of the cliff? Why weren't you holding onto her?"

“Well , she slipped with some rocks and I didn’t had (didn’t have )a time to hold her it was so sudden”

Am I still stupid , is that what u want me to do ?