Pls help me out of this complicate GRAMMER

Ok sir

so u gonna give me more ?

see ya

i'm a chinese college student ,i have been learning english for 8 years,but as a alien ,i want to improve my english in all subjects.i haven't get a effective way .

please help me or suggest me some good suggests.

thanks!

Hello Janice definitely I accept ur impressive offer . THANKS a lot . But first of all I want to promise u that I won’t give up and I’ll try my best . Bcoz I give up so easily .I have no constant effort to achieve something. But I won’t let it happen this time so I promise u Ok   

U said u’ll give me some speech so please……. 

And I’m not so good in writing letters or story so I’ve made sentences so please check them out . 

1.     Tomy was a drugs addict and alcoholic. Since he was 18 he used drugs and after few years he started to drink alcohol .He died with the blood poison only he was 21.  

2.     Mr Jones bought a new coat yesterday and he got stain when he had (when he was having) breakfast so I had to wash out .

3.     Jones said by the time he arrived and his mom had left  

4.     He said he seen the movie and he had gone out form cinema. Or He said he had seen the movie and he had gone out form cinema.

5.     I know my hair style was so ugly , lots of people told (said to )  me too .

Hello Shab

Yes, I'll be happy to think up some exercises on "would", etc.

Tell me something you like to do in your spare time, and I'll build them round that.

MrP

Okay...here are some sentences. See if you can change them into sentences that use "would" and "should":

1. Ought you to be using the internet so much?

2. There's a choice of tea and coffee. Which do you want to drink?

3. When I was a small boy, I used to go and watch the football every week.

4. If I go home late again tonight, I'll get into trouble.

5. At your age, is it wise to drink so much whisky?

MrP

hi.

this is my teacher's advice : you can improve your English conversation with story books you should listen to the tapes & repeat everything you heard. then compare it with text & tapes.

bye

saeed babaee (sa_ba1384@yahoo.com)