composition help!!!urgent!!!

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Anonymous  #184013  Mon, 16 Jan 06 11:27 AM

some one help me with this composition pls

the title is "i made a mistake by telling him or her my secret"!!!

pls help me, i'm out of idea!!!Crying [:'(]

  
pieanne  #184021  Mon, 16 Jan 06 11:34 AM

Sorry, you'll have to come up with some text, and we'll be glad to check it for mistakes...

  
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YoHf  #184384  Mon, 16 Jan 06 09:36 PM

Try to make a list of the pros and cons of telling someone a secret.

Ex.:

Pros: It makes you feel better

Cons: There is the risk that that person tells someone else you secret

Good luck.

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