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#537702 Mon, 07 Jul 08 12:29 PM

Hello Guys!

1. Could you please check the pronoun of this sentence?

2.Is it shows clear concept about fear?

3. Seemed complete sentence?

Sometimes our inner fears [or use word interfere?] come in our ways to resolve the problems.

Thanks !

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#537723 Mon, 07 Jul 08 01:18 PM

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Sometimes our inner fears get in the way of resolving our problems.

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