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Antonija  +  716151 Tue, 05 May 09 07:34 AM
Can you please help me with two questions:

1. Which phrase is more appropriate here, "in conclusion" or "we conclude"?

2. Is there a phrase which would fit better in this context than "more successful"? The target meaning here is "more precise, more accurate".


We conclude that TWG technique/In conclusion, TWG technique was significantly more successful in positioning the chest tube on desired place in the pleural cavity commpared to CS technique.


Thank you in advance

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Mister Micawber  +  716732 Tue, 05 May 09 03:27 PM
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1-- Either will do.

2-- Use 'accurate/precise'.

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Antonija, 204 days ago
Thank you for your help.
Antonija  +  716911 Tue, 05 May 09 05:58 PM
I was wondering if you can use "precise" without a noun after it, as in my sentence?
Mister Micawber  +  717465 Wed, 06 May 09 12:14 AM
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Using precise, accurate, successful or any other adjective in that position requires no further noun; they are all predicate adjectives modifying 'technique'.

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Antonija, 203 days ago
OK, thanks.
Antonija  +  718089 Wed, 06 May 09 08:44 AM
I have to insert the phrase in italics here.


1) Can you please tell me if it is OK to say OF human cadaver model?

2) Are HUMAN and MODEL redundant here? Or should I leave out everything after CAVITY?


In conclusion, TWG technique was significantly more precise in placing the chest tube in intended position in the pleural cavity of human cadaver model compared to CS technique.


Thank you in advance


Mister Micawber  +  718095 Wed, 06 May 09 08:58 AM
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Could you just post in plain text?  I cannot figure all that out.

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Antonija  +  718149 Wed, 06 May 09 09:29 AM
Ups, sorry..

Here it is:


In conclusion, TWG technique was significantly more precise in placing the chest tube in intended position in the pleural cavity (of human cadaver model) compared to CS technique thoracostomy.


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