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Cheese1987  #317956  Sun, 21 Jan 07 11:36 AM

Hello everybody, I’m Shirley. I am a quiet person that I enjoy staying at home in my leisure time. I enjoy playing with my pets. Actually, I have four cats and a dog, all of whom are lovely and unique. So I never feel bored when I stay at home. Also, I enjoy reading book. ”Pride and Prejudice” is my favorite novel that I had read it by several times.


To be honest, my English level is low. However, as we all know English is essential in our world. , no matter for your further study or your future career. Thus I need to improve it by a great effort. Furthermore, I will sit for the Use of English examination in the coming April. I hope that I can have a satisfactory result in it.

This is my friend's composition.

Please help me to correct it~~thanks~

  
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Feebs11  #317974  Sun, 21 Jan 07 12:47 PM
 Cheese1987 wrote:

Hello everybody, I’m Shirley. I am a quiet person that [who enjoys OR and I ]  enjoy staying at home in my leisure time. I enjoy playing with my pets. Actually, I have four cats and a dog, all of whom are lovely and unique. So I never feel bored when I stay at home. Also, I enjoy reading book [either plural "books" or singular "a book"]. ”Pride and Prejudice” is my favorite novel that [and] I had [have] read it by several times.


To be honest, my English level is low. However, as we all know, English is essential in our world. , no matter for  [, both for] your further study or your future career. Thus I need to improve it by [making] a great effort. Furthermore, I will sit for the Use of English examination in the coming April. I hope that I can have [will have] a satisfactory result in it.

This is my friend's composition.

Please help me to correct it~~thanks~

  
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