Can you help me to correct my cover letter thank you...

Bonjour

I'm french and i would like to enter a training..half of the time i will be spent in school and the other part in a company...so you would be very nice if you help me to correct my cover letter...

thank you!


Dear Mr./Ms. Last Name:


I am writing to you to express my interest in the executive assistant training in alternation.
After visiting your school, during the opening day and meeting the people who were in charge of the training, I was sure that I would like to enter your school.

Indeed, the alternation system is the best way for a student to know about the particularities of working in a global environment, all the more since most of the courses are in English.
Moreover, it will enable me, to acquire solids knowledge to understand the diversity of competences needed, and to prepare my professional project which is working in an import export company.

Thanks to that training I hope to contribute my trade and communication skills as well as my marketing skills in order to begin an international business career. Furthermore, in my resume you can see my desire for learning and evidences of my relational ease gained working in telemarketing companies or in the international sales department where I had to train sales representatives to use the new CRM data base.

I have enclosed my resume for your perusal and I am flexible to meet you to further discuss the potential of my joining Advancia training. I will contact you in the near future to confirm my resume has been received and to discuss the possibility of meeting face to face.

Thank you for your time and consideration on behalf.

Sincerely,