Please help correct my english, I am applying for a job at home and lifestyle section in a departmentstore... Thank u:)

I am an interior design graduate who is mainly interested in the subjects of art, architecture and furniture design. Through six years of studying art and design, I have developed good communication skills and understanding of materials. In addition to my degree in interior design, I have also developed strong customer services, team management and organizational skills while working on the furniture department team at Habitat Ltd. With these qualities and a strong belief in my own abilities, I think that I can be a valuable addition to Selfridge's & Co.

Thank you very much for this opportunity to present my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you and would welcome the opportunity to meet with you to discuss my credentials.



[It is not clear how studying art and design could develop communication skills. You should specify your degree. You should add a short phrase descriptive of Habitat Ltd. Please check the exact spelling of Selfridge's. I presume that your resume will accompany this cover letter. If not, you need to rewrite, supplying more specifics of your documented skills and abilities.]