Please correct the following sentence

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Anonymous  #545968  Thu, 24 Jul 08 06:08 PM
Please arrange for payment for this quotation to mobilize the work at the earliest
  
Clive  #546031  Thu, 24 Jul 08 10:45 PM
Hi,
Please arrange for payment for this quotation to mobilize the work at the earliest

Please arrange payment for this invoice so that the work can begin as soon as possible.
Clive
  
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Anonymous  #546593  Sat, 26 Jul 08 10:00 AM
Thank you for your help
  
Anonymous  #546594  Sat, 26 Jul 08 10:06 AM
Can I also write as follows;

Please arrange for payment to mobilize the work as soon as possible

  
Clive  #546745  Sat, 26 Jul 08 06:42 PM
Hi,
'Mobilize' does not sound very natural here.
Clive
  
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