Please help correct my grammar

Hi Zoe,

Why don't you register? Then your posts will appear right away!

There are a number of ways you can say this. The only thing you MUST change is to put a period where you have your first comma.

The report has been created. - Don't you want to say "I have created the report"? Either way is okay, but if you did it, say you did it!

Please have a look - this is okay, but a bit informal. You can say "Please review" instead.

and let me know if there are any places [or if there is anything] that need improvement.

So, here are two versions, either of which should be fine:

I've created the report. Please review it and let me know if there is anything that needs improvement.

The report has been created. Please review it and let me know if there are any places that need changes.

Hi Barbara,

Thank you for your correction. BTW, how can register to become the member of this forums? (I'm so silly ) Please advise

Regards/Zoe

Grammar Geek wrote:

Hi Zoe, In the upper right corner of your screen, it should say "Join." http://www.englishforums.com/user/CreateUser.aspx?ReturnUrl=/logout.aspx

Hi Barbara,

I already join the forums, but I cannot see my name appears ?

Zoe