Correct the grammar of the paragraphs.

Newbie2007 wrote:

Please help me correct the grammar of these paragraphs. Thanks so much. Right away,-said my mother (for example)- it's nearly 11:00 pm. I've just gotten  through replying to a friend  (it's very complicated, it'd better to change it), it was quite long, so I have to take a long time. She's Taiwanese, quite nice and very kind. She's very curious about Vietnamese culture, activity, attitude with foreigner.... Also She wants to travel to Vietnam and have a specialities. While I had been writing, Tuan buzzed me, pointed to a website and asked me for giving some advice about choosing model of shoes he should buy. I've done it! Kept on writing. (It would better to make sentence, but not a fragment.) For a bit lately Huynh Anh greeted me. I asked her to wait for a moment. Then, I had continued my business. When I  had finished, She was being out of network for a long time, hix?.... sorry for this. I was looking for someone to chat. Today, my friend go back to his hometown. The hope of getting some speciality from his hometown after his return, hehe. Hmmm, let me remember whether there is any talk which happened today to relate to you - terrible construction (is it question or something elst?). Ah, Sea Games 24. Whe we were Finishing the class in the afternoon, I and my friends went to a coffee shop for watching the football match between Vietnam and Malaysia. This match, Vietnamese team played was not good although trouncing Malaysian team. (it's acceptable - Although Vietnamese team played bad they could beat their opponents.) Be quite disappointed (We were very flabbergasted and dissapointed at the same time) . What about you ? Hix, I'm getting going to have a good sleep.. Tomorrow is Sunday, hope for a nice weekend for everybody. Good night.

     Right away, it's nearly 11:00 pm. I've just got through replying to a friend , the letter is quite long, so I it took a long time to write. She's Taiwanese, quite nice and very kind. She's extremly curious about Vietnamese culture, activity, attitude with foreigner.... She also wants to travel to Vietnam and have specialities. While I was writing, Tuan buzzed me, gave me a website and asked me to him some advice about choosing which model of shoes he should buy. I gave him my advice, and he had chosen.

I kept on writing into the day.  A short while later, Huynh Anh said hi to me. I told her to wait a moment. Then, I continued my business. When I finished, she went off-line for a long time, hey.... sorry for this.

I tried to find someone to chat with, but no one was online. Today, my friend went back to his hometown. He was hoping to get some speciality from his hometown after his return. hehe.

Hmmm, let me remember whether there was any conversations which happened today to relate to you. Ah, Sea Games 24. This afternoon, after finishing the class, my friends and I went to a coffee shop to watch the football match between Vietnam and Malaysia. This match, the Vietnamese team played not very well although beating the Malaysian team. I was quite disappointed; were you ?

Well, I'm getting sleepy. Tomorrow is Sunday, and i wish everybody a beautiful weekend.

                 Goodnight