Please correct this letter 4 me Please,

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Jaberdene  #543647  Sat, 19 Jul 08 08:37 PM
Hi

Can anybody correct following letter, please ASAP.

I just turned eighteen last November. Im a second year student at *** university
I was invited by my parents who live in UK at the moment  during my summer
term  holiday to visit them.
My mother will pay all of my visit money which would be  about 5000USD.
The money will be withdrawn by me from my mother's savings account resides in *** bank .
I'll take the money with me when I arrive in UK.
I have an access  to take money out from that savings cos
I am the shared account holder of that savings. .

Thanks a lot
JE
  
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