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Anonymous

#576408 Tue, 14 Oct 08 10:32 PM

were remade five times
available commercially
independently of the state
with gently stirring

Clive

#576415 Tue, 14 Oct 08 10:51 PM

Hi,

There are no obvious errors here, but you need to try to use these words in sentences to allow us to evaluate them properly.

Clive

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RayH

#576441 Wed, 15 Oct 08 01:18 AM

Anonymous
with gently stirring

I can't think of case where this would be correct.

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Clive

#576444 Wed, 15 Oct 08 01:31 AM

Hi,

That's why I asked for a full sentence.

I suppose you could say something like 'The birds awoke with gently stirring wings'.

Clive