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#576882 Thu, 16 Oct 08 06:50 AM

With one quick move she sat on his chest, a gold cross fell out her top. He felt his strength ebb away.

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#577066 Thu, 16 Oct 08 08:50 PM

Hi,
With one quick move she sat on his chest, a gold cross fell out her top. He felt his strength ebb away.
With one quick move, she sat on his chest. A gold cross fell out of her top. He felt his strength ebb away.

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