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poci_wasiats  #514724  Sat, 17 May 08 07:51 AM

 are there any grammar mistakes in this sentence??thanx..

A company should prepare everything in a particular time before new systems to be implemented into the current systems in order to prevent something that unexpected by the company.

  
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26TMNTJG2PG  #514771  Sat, 17 May 08 11:14 AM

A company should prepare everything before the new systems are implemented to prevent any contingencies.

  
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New2grammar  #514774  Sat, 17 May 08 11:20 AM

Is it advisable to add 'the'?

I would avoid that by

A company should prepare everything before implementing a new system to prevent any contingencies.

  
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poci_wasiats  #514823  Sat, 17 May 08 01:12 PM

Is it advisable to add 'the'?

I would avoid that by

A company should prepare everything before implementing a new system to prevent any contingencies.

 

 A company should prepare everything before implementing a new system to prevent any contingencies.  <<  i think it's correct because you just put a system,but

  A company should prepare everything before implementing the new systems to prevent any contingencies.  <<  plural...

 

 

  
26TMNTJG2PG  #515153  Sun, 18 May 08 10:55 AM

Yes, it is ok just to say a new system.

  
Clive  #515286  Sun, 18 May 08 07:55 PM

Hi guys,

It's not idiomatic to say 'to prevent contingencies'.

Sat 'to be able to handle all contingencies' or perhaps 'to be prepared for all contingencies'.

Best wishes, Clive

  
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26TMNTJG2PG  #515933  Tue, 20 May 08 10:29 AM

WECC Policy Regarding Extreme Contingencies and Unplanned Events

The key element to preventing cascading outages for more common or foreseeable contingencies

is operating the system within known and defined secure system conditions as defined in the

WECC Minimum Operating Reliability Criteria and NERC/WECC Planning Standards.

It is not feasible or even possible to predict or prevent all multiple contingency events.

FROM http://www.wecc.biz/documents/library/procedures/WECC_POLICY12.pdf

Given these realities, what can be done to prevent contingency operations from hurting readiness?

FROM http://www.defenselink.mil/speeches/speech.aspx?speechid=824

The next step is to plan how to recover needed resources. In evaluating alternatives, it is necessary to consider what controls are in place to prevent and minimize contingencies.

FROM http://csrc.nist.gov/publications/nistpubs/800-12/800-12-html/chapter11.html

The above sentences are taken from the internet to help evaluating the statement, It's not idiomatic to say 'to prevent contingencies'.

Best regards.

  
Clive  #515970  Tue, 20 May 08 12:14 PM

Hi,

You can find all kinds of things on the internet. These texts seem to me to be rather full of specialized jargon. Try a search with 'handle contingencies', 'allow for contingencies', and see what you find.

Finally, of course, it's your choice. Smile

Best wishes, Clive

  
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