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User_gary  #343571  Mon, 26 Mar 07 08:58 AM
I believe this is(losing matches) nothing new to Indian team. As we know Indian team only wins 25% of its matches. The Indian team is known for losing matches on many occasions. They hardly win any matches. But still the Indian people are crazy expecting too much from their team. Indian people should realise their cricket team is not good enough to play against mighty teams. They are just like Bangladesh, Zimbabwe and any other low considered teams.

Dravid or any other who would give interview should simply say, "We are known for losing matches and it has happened again". Do not mess up the situation by giving too much unwanted/unbelievable excuses.

Please correct my sentences/two paragraphs.
  
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Doll  #343629  Mon, 26 Mar 07 12:19 PM

I think losing matches is nothing new with the Indian team as we all know this team only wins 25% of its matches.Even we can say because they hardly win any matches they are known for losing matches(pffff a bit funny).However, Indian people still expect too much from their team.(don't add crazy.It may lead misunderstanding)but they should accept that their cricket team is not good enough to play against mighty teams.They are just as strong as the teams such as Bangladesh, Zimbabwe and any other weak teams.(From now on hide your identityBig Smile [:D])Moreover, it wouldn't be surprising David's or any others' from the team saying " we always lose matches, everyone knows this and it happened again." I think they had better don't mess the situation up by giving too much excuses..

  
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User_gary  #343635  Mon, 26 Mar 07 12:28 PM
 Doll wrote:

.(From now on hide your identityBig Smile [:D])]

Thank you Doll.

It is indeed great help.

What you mean (From now on hide your idendity)?

  
Doll  #343636  Mon, 26 Mar 07 12:30 PM
Don't tell an Indian that you wrote this paragraph or else they may hit you.Big Smile [:D]I am kidding, Gary don't add this sentence in your paragraph.
  
User_gary  #343641  Mon, 26 Mar 07 12:41 PM

 Doll wrote:
Don't tell an Indian that you wrote this paragraph or else they may hit you.Big Smile [:D]I am kidding, Gary don't add this sentence in your paragraph.

I will sent this message to Indian team and Indian people because I am also an Indian. The basic problem with us (Indian people) is that we expect too much from our team. As I already told Indian cricket team wins only 25 to 40% of their matches. Still we hope to win `World Cup' which is practically not possible.

So, I am sending my messages which have been corrected by you to Indian team/people.

  
Doll  #343803  Mon, 26 Mar 07 08:24 PM

Nooooooooo!I didn!t correct anything.I don't know who did it.Don't involve me in such thingsBig Smile [:D]

  
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