Please help me correct my scholarship application letter

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Showboy  #460732  Sat, 05 Jan 08 02:39 PM

                                                                       

Dear Scholarship Committee:

Please consider me Yale Scholarship. I have completed and enclosed the scholarship application form with the required annexes.

I am applying to pursue a master’s degree in diplmacy at Yale. The program offered at the University gives me the opportunity to put my knowledge into a higher standard and to enhance my skills in diplomacy.

 Because of the poor economic and financial situation in my country, I wish to apply for a scholarship to accomplish my professional goals of becoming a leader. If I successfully graduate from the Institute, I will play an active role in the development of my country and the world.

My university and work activities provide me with numerous leadership opportunities and a chance to practice important skills vital for my career goal to become a leader.

I am currently working in England specialize in labor import, exportation and developmental project analysis. I work on competitive development programs for foreign companies. I also write reports about their strategy and implementation

Receiving this scholarship will reduce the financial burden on my family and me. It will also allow me to continue taking care of my younger brother’s financial needs in the university. Trying to take care of my younger brother’s financial needs while going to school full-time in a foreign country is expensive, but I am confident that my education will pay off in the long run. Until then, the institute Scholarship would greatly assist my financial and academic needs.

Thank you for considering my application.

Sincerely,

  
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