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Anonymous  #514280  Fri, 16 May 08 04:04 AM

 No news from you a long times...Your looking is nice bald which is black shine...  he... I know you never feel bad about that.. i heard that you recently came and stayed in Bangalore for few days. Why you didn’t inform me when you came here. I think you may forget where I stay or other reason. I should respect your reason and make yielding in my mind...i think you found questnet's problem through newspaper especially your friends..  My questnet is good progress and being encouraged to motivate by my leader of questnet... I felt more comfortable despite our business has been blame by media, newspaper and some of my friends who always mentioned questnet’s problem without fully reading newspaper and considering what's right and wrong.. Questnet is the fourth of most business company in the world.. It has spread across 260 countries over the world which are not concerned the business except India and also member of India questnet who are not training, impatience and uneducated   because they live slum in the village. . The business has been many blame by media and newspaper in India.. Both of them are negative talking more than positive because people have interested in listening negative talking through news and newspaper... Many actors have made irritate by them... Unfortunately it has been tough and disappointed to have the business is spoil famous... I think you have already known at all. let's not trust media and newspaper...

  
Clive  #515097  Sun, 18 May 08 05:51 AM

Hi,

I think the reason you have not had any replies is that youhave a lot of problems here.

I can understand most of your sentences, but your grammar and sentence structure needs improvement. I suggest you begin by improving your punctuation. You need to treplace all the sequences of 3 dots by periods and commas.

What does this mean? Your looking is nice bald which is black shine...  he... And this? My questnet is good progress

Post again with corrections and clarifications, and I'll have another look at other parts of this, OK?

Best wishes, Clive

  
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